Showing posts with label Story Genius. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Story Genius. Show all posts

Thursday, 12 March 2020

CWD Member Interview – Cecily Paterson


Most Thursdays this year we will be interviewing one of the members of Christian Writers Downunder – to find out a little bit more about them and their writing/editing goals.

Todays interview: Cecily Paterson


Question 1: Tell us three things about who you are and where you come from.



  1. I spent most of my childhood in Pakistan, where I went to a British school, and then an international boarding school in the Himalayas, so I’ve had some pretty outlandish and exotic family holidays, including a road trip to the border of China at 16,000ft altitude. 
  2. These days I’m a work-from-home freelance writer and editor, which I combine with being a stay at home mum of four kids, although one of them grew up recently and went off to uni, so technically I’m only a stay at home mum of three kids. 
  3. When I was 40, I took up learning the cello, which turned out to be a hard and frustrating, yet rewarding and enjoyable experience. My pleasures and pains in this endeavour have contributed plenty of life-lesson-type-wisdom fodder for my slightly neglected blog. (www.cecilypaterson.com)


Question 2: Tell us about your writing (or editing/illustrating etc).  What do you write and why?


Mostly I write what I call ‘bravehearted books for girls’. It’s realistic fiction for readers age 10-14 (upper middle grade and lower YA) and as all my main characters are female, I tend to pitch for female readers (although boys have been known to read and enjoy my stories.) My eighth novel, Lola in the Middle is being released by Wombat Books on 15 May this year. I’m in the process of re-releasing my Invisible series with adorably gorgeous new covers.
My first two books were a biography, Never Alone, about a man who was rescued from an orphanage in Israel and brought up by a single Australian missionary woman, as then a memoir of the five years following my son’s diagnosis with autistic spectrum disorder, Love Tears & Autism. 
Currently I’m the writer for a collaborative project with two friends who are not writers, but who have 9 fantasy/sci-fi/historical ‘gaslamp’ stories in their heads. We’re halfway through book 2. It’s fun to write things I wouldn’t normally.
In term 3 of this year I have plans to tackle a biblical fiction piece, based on the story of the mother of the man born blind from John 9. 
On another front, I really enjoy teaching writing. I have an online Write Your Memoir course and a blog full of writing resources at The Red Lounge for Writers. (www.redloungeforwriters.com) I’m currently cooking up a short course for fiction writers on how to nail Point of View. It’s something that seems easy, but isn’t always, and it can really let down our writing if we muck it up. Get right, though, and it’s the invisible ‘it’ factor that makes a book really shine.


Question 3: Who has read your work? Who would you like to read it? 


Who has read my work? Not nearly enough people, as far as I’m concerned! Ha ha. Don’t we all feel that way? But seriously… every time I think about giving up writing, I get a beautiful email from someone (a young teenager mostly) who tells me how much my book has meant to them, and how I shouldn’t ever stop writing. It’s lovely. I always write back and tell them they are my current favourite person in the world – which is true. And I don’t stop writing. But I do find the whole process of finding a large and consistent audience slow, tedious and discouraging. 
Who would I like to read my work? Every girl in every English-speaking country who is inclined to read, who enjoys realistic fiction, who’s between 10 and 14. How’s that for being both specific and ambitious? One of my other dreams is to get my books into every public library in Australia. (If you like my stuff, you could suggest to your library to purchase it. Thanks.)
In terms of the Red Lounge for Writers, I’d love everyone who’s thinking about writing a memoir, or partway through the task, to look at my course. It’s helped quite a few beginner writers so far, and I think it could help more. 

Question 4: Tell us something about your process. What challenges do you face? What helps you the most?


My process is mostly this: sit down, start typing. Don’t get up until your word count is done.
That’s not quite all there is to it, but it’s the most important part. I have four and a half days per week, from 9am to 3pm, that I can use for my writing and promotional work, and any freelance projects I have on. It’s technically only 25 hours, once you take out breaks. I plan to write on three of those days, and I attempt to get 3000 words onto the screen per day, so 9000 words a week. 
Story planning is very important for my work: I’m definitely a ‘plotter’ rather than a pantser, mostly because my time is so limited that I like to know exactly where I’m going before I start, so as to be most efficient with the words I write.
I lose time for a few reasons: first, I get sick every 6-8 weeks with what I call an energy crash. (These started when I had glandular fever 29 years ago and lay me low for two to three days at a time. After long naps and a lot of ‘bed’ time, I get up and I’m fine, but they take their toll on my writing.) 
Second, I am SO easily distracted, it’s almost laughable. I have a mantra for myself: 45 seconds. Research shows that we distract our own brains every 45 seconds. If I can last longer than that, I’ll have resisted the urge to get sidetracked and can keep on going.
Third, sometimes I get lonely as a writer. I sit here all day in my laundry (seriously… I divided my laundry in half and put my desk is in one end) and talk to no one. It helps to have a quick online chat here and there with other lonely writers.
What helps me is to visualize the end result—the published book. I think I like ‘having written’, rather than writing itself. Also, food and drinks help. My preferred beverages and snacks to get me through are decaf tea (lots of it), dark chocolate and a bowlful of frozen vegetables. 

Question 5: What is your favourite Writing Craft Book and why? 


I have three.
  1. Save the Cat, by Blake Snyder. Yes, it says it’s about screen-writing, but really it's about story structure. It's funny, it's clear and it'll help you plan out your memoir or your novel and get a clearer idea on exactly what you're writing. 
  2. Story Genius, by Lisa Cron. Lisa’s the genius in laying out so clearly exactly what the emotional hook of your writing needs to be, and exactly how to do it.
  3. Understanding Show, Don’t Tell (and really getting it) by Janice Hardy. This book promises exactly what it delivers.
Check out my page at www.redloungeforwriters.com/resources for more great writing craft books

Question 6: If you were to give a shout-out to a CWD author, writer, editor or illustrator – who would they be?


Kristen Young is working super hard to finish book 2 of her trilogy that she was signed with Steve Laube. Keep that word count going!
Penny Reeve has been a tremendous support to me in the last year or so, and she writes great books too. Definitely worth a read. 
I can’t forget Raewyn Elsegood, who is a powerhouse in organizational prowess. She pulls together the Omega Writers Conference at great cost to her own time and energy and gives so expansively and generously to others. It’s almost impossible to over-appreciate her service to Christian writers in Australia.

Question 7: What are your writing goals for this year? How will you achieve them?


Four books. Total word count: 285,000. I’m on track so far. Like I said, bottom on chair, hands on keyboard. 

Question 8: How does your faith impact and shape your writing?



I always feel weird about this question. We don’t ask car mechanics how their faith shapes the way they work on their cars, or baristas how their faith affects the coffee they make. I’m trying to make writing work for me as a job (I’d certainly like to write full time, for a reasonable amount of money … it’s not happening yet, but I keep trying). I don’t have a direct ‘calling’ to tell specifically Christian stories and I am writing for the general market. However, as my faith affects the way I live my life in private and public, it shapes what and how I write. I literally can’t write anything I feel uncomfortable with, in terms of sexual suggestiveness or violence. Instead, I like to put out positive, yet realistic stories for children embedded with hope, justice and mercy. As a Christian, I’m called to put good into the world, so I write things that I think will benefit people, or at the very least, not take them to dark places. 




Thursday, 16 May 2019

Meet Our Members: Sally Poyzer



Most Thursdays in 2019 we will be interviewing one of the members of Christian Writers Downunder – to find out a little bit more about them and their writing/editing goals.

Today interview Sally Poyzer

Tells us three things about who you are and where you come from.

I got married to Josh when I was 19 years old and we’ve now been married nearly 21 years. We have two wonderful kids: our daughter, Promise (10) and our son, Rockford (4).

I grew up in cold, wet Mount Gambier at the bottom of South Australia. After our honeymoon Josh and I moved to the top of the country to sunny, tropical Darwin. We really loved it up there! 



Following God’s call into ministry, we moved back to Adelaide nearly 11 years ago.

Tell us about your writing (or editing/illustrating etc).  What do you write and why?

I have written non-fiction books, novels, middle grade fiction, picture books, poems, plays and even a musical!

So far I’ve only (self) published one book, ‘That Book for Wives’. I wrote it because I found the first few years of marriage challenging: my husband just wouldn’t do what I wanted him to do! I whinged to God and He began to show me how I could change my marriage. As I saw my marriage transform, I jotted down the different lessons God was teaching me. Eventually I turned it in to a book and published it. It only took me 14 years! It’s an easy to read book with lots of short, super-practical tips.

I write because I love to write – it is fun to create stories and I really enjoy trying to construct a well-written sentence. My other main motivation is wanting to help draw others nearer to God.


Who has read your work? Who would you like to read it?

It’s been lovely hearing from complete strangers in Australian and the US who have emailed me to say how much my book has helped their marriage. But, of course, I’d love many more people to read it. I would also love more CWD members to read it because I think we all appreciate how important reviews are to authors! So, to get more CWD members reading and (hopefully) reviewing it, I’d like to offer two things:

  1. A giveaway. I’m going to give away one a free copy of ‘That Book for Wives’, posted to anywhere in Australia. To have a chance of winning the free book, please share in the comments your best tip for someone who is about to get married. Next week I’ll send ‘That Book for Wives’ to my favourite tip!
  2. A free PDF. If you’d like to read my book and write an honest review on Amazon, Goodreads or Koorong (or all three!), please message me your email address and I’d be happy to email you a PDF of ‘That Book for Wives’.


Tell us something about your process. What challenges do you face? What helps you the most?

I find it very challenging to get time on the computer to write. I have run my own consulting business from home for nearly 10 years, which has been a great blessing with young kids. However, it also means my kids always see me on the computer (for work) so trying to get back on it to write (for fun) is hard – to them it just looks like I’m ignoring them again! Not getting much time on the computer can be frustrating, especially since I have about 10 different books I’m thinking about/working on at the moment (4 books in a kids adventure series, 2 novels, 3 books in the ‘That Book for …’ series and a cookbook!).

One trick that’s helped has been to record my ideas on the Voice Recorder app on my phone, which I can do when driving to pick up the kids from school. Knowing the ideas are recorded removes the worry that I will forget them.

I also make sure I have a small exercise book lying around my house so I can quickly jot down thoughts when I get them. Then, when I actually get time to jump on the computer and type, I have plenty of material to work with. I usually aim to write for a couple of hours every Sunday afternoon, although sometimes I just end up crashing in bed with a good book and some chocolate!

What is your favourite Writing Craft Book and why?

I recently read Lisa Cron’s ‘Story Genius’, as recommended by some of you in CWD. I borrowed it from the library and quickly realised I needed to buy my own copy so I could highlight it. It’s definitely a book you need to interact with! I loved the first third or so because it really got me thinking about my characters and their motivation and how this (rather than the external plot) is really what the story is about. However, from there it got a little bit too prescriptive for me. I finished it, but the last part of the book had a lot less highlighting. Still, it was definitely worth reading.



If you were to give a shout-out to a CWD author, writer, editor or illustrator – who would they be?

Um, all of them? I am so grateful for this group. When I first joined CWD (at the recommendation of someone at Book Whispers) I had no idea about the publishing and marketing process. I have learnt so much from the blogs, from people’s posts and from members who have answered my questions. Thank you everyone, for sharing your wealth of knowledge and allowing me to be a part of your journey too.

What are your writing goals for 2019? How will you achieve them?

My goals for this year are to:

  • Finish writing the fourth book in my adventure series for 7-10 year old kids and hopefully find a publisher, which may be a bit challenging. The books have a strong Christian message, but also have some toilet humour! The kids who’ve read my drafts love the humour and the suspense, but I’m not sure if Christian publishers will be keen to publish books with references to wee and booger, even if the kids in the books meet heroes from the Bible and learn valuable Scriptural truths. Thoughts and suggestions would be gratefully appreciated.

  • Launch a blog. I watched a video by Cyle Young (a Christian literary agent) last year where he talked about the importance of platform which made me realise a blog could be a good way to increase my platform. My plan is to focus on writing practical blogs about Christianity (e.g. an overview of the story of the Bible, a ‘Reading the Bible for the first time’ reading plan), marriage (e.g. how to forgive when he hasn’t said sorry, how to apologise well), and parenting (e.g. teaching your kids to be kind to each other, how I got rid of TV during the week). I’ve started writing it already but want to get a few more finished before launching. I’m also thinking these blogs will help me get some content written for a couple of books in my ‘That Book for …’ series. I’m not sure how I’m going to achieve these two goals with only a couple of hours each Sunday, but I figure it’s one word at a time!

How does your faith impact and shape your writing?

All of my books (apart from the cookbook!) have a significant faith element. All the ‘That Book for …’ books are Biblically-based. I started writing the kids series because I was trying to teach my daughter powerful truths from the Bible (such as, you don’t need to be afraid because God is always with you) in a fun, engaging way. Even my novels, which don’t have a particular ‘message’, are written from a Christian world-view.

I’m really conscious that Christians don’t love super-preachy books, but at the same time, I believe story is a very powerful way of sharing the truth of the gospel. Hopefully I can get the balance right!



Sally Poyzer is a credentialed pastor with CRC Churches International and has spent many years ministering to women, particularly in the area of marriage. She is passionate about sharing how God can help wives enjoy being married.

​With a background in corporate training and a Bachelor in Adult and Vocational Education, Sally is an experienced and enthusiastic preacher and teacher. She has her own consulting business, specialising in writing and facilitating customised training programs, as well as writing and formatting business documents.

Sally was married at nineteen to Josh Poyzer, who is now the Senior Pastor of Portlife Church. They have been married over twenty years and live with their two gorgeous children, Promise and Rockford, in Adelaide, South Australia. She loves reading, especially literature, with Pride & Prejudice easily topping her list of favourite books.

Thursday, 20 July 2017

Digging Deeper With Character by Nola Passmore


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My protagonist has a really clear goal.  Maggie is a young Englishwoman travelling to Nova Scotia in 1881 to find her young brother and sister who've been sent to Canada as part of the Home Children program (a scheme that sent orphans and waifs from England to homes and farms in Canada). She was working abroad as a governess when their mother died, and the children were shipped off to Canada without her knowledge.  Sounds like a pretty good premise, doesn't it?  Well I thought so, until Lisa Cron arrived and shook my world.  Lisa Cron is the author of Story Genius: How to Use Brain Science to Go Beyond Outlining and Write a Riveting Novel.

If someone had asked me a few months ago about my character's motivation, I would have said that she wants to reunite her family.  If they'd asked why, I would have looked at them with a blank expression.  Well isn't it obvious?  Anyone in that situation would want to find their siblings and reunite their family.  The trouble is that I was looking at the external motivation without considering what was going on under the surface.  In Story Genius, Cron shows how to dig deeper to find out what your characters are really about.  What is the internal struggle going on that's fleshed out in the plot?  Do they have misconceptions that drive their behaviour?  Who were they the day before your novel began and how is that going to change as the novel progresses? Without that underlying conflict, the story can just become a bunch of things that happen, regardless of how beautifully written it is.



To avoid spoilers, I don't want to say too much more about my novel, except that I've discovered Maggie's main issue is abandonment.  Instead, let me use a hypothetical example to show you how 'digging down' might work.

Imagine your protagonist, Miranda, has a dream of becoming the CEO of a large corporation.  She starts out as an Administrative Assistant and overcomes a barrage of obstacles to finally reach the top.  However, the story won't necessarily engage the reader.  Unless we can connect with Miranda in some way, we won't want to go with her on the journey.  We won't care if she makes it or not. To build a connection with readers, you need to go deeper into her motivation. Why does she want to get to the top?  There are many possible reasons, but let's say she wants to have a job where she can earn a lot of money.  Why does she want to earn a lot of money?  So she can buy the things she's always wanted (e.g. nice clothes, house, car, travel).  But why does she want those things?  It's because her family didn't have a lot of money when she was growing up and she often missed out on things like a new dress.

So far, we've discovered some of the reasons that make Miranda tick, but it's still pretty general.  Most people would like more money so they can buy things they want.  Why does this mean so much to Miranda?  Think of a specific event when she couldn't afford something she wanted.  How about this?  When she was in Grade 10 at school, a boy she liked asked her to the school dance, but she didn't have anything suitable to wear.  She couldn't afford to buy a new dress and she didn't want to wear one of her old ones because some of the girls at school had previously made fun of her clothes.  So rather than be embarrassed, she turned down the invitation.  The boy asked someone else to the dance and she stayed home.  So how did that make her feel?  She felt like she was a second-class citizen who wasn't as good as the other girls.  She felt unloved.  What is the incorrect belief that guides her current behaviour?  She thinks that if she can rise to the top of the corporation and earn a lot of money, she will finally gain the love and acceptance she craves.  However, this is a mistaken belief because money doesn't guarantee love and happiness.  The plot then shows Miranda's internal struggle and we see her change over the course of the novel.  There's still more drilling down to do, but hopefully you're getting a sense of what is needed.  It's the internal struggle that drives the plot and builds connections with readers.

Lisa Cron explains it much better in her book, with lots of examples and practical tips.  I highly recommend Story Genius if you want your novel to really connect with readers rather than just being pretty prose that goes nowhere.  Now I just have to apply that advice to my own novel!

Could you dig deeper with any of your characters?  I'd love to hear your thoughts.


Nola Passmore is a writer and editor who has had more than 140 short pieces published, including fiction, poetry, devotions, magazine articles, and true stories.  She and her husband Tim own and operate a freelance writing and editing business called The Write Flourish.  You can find her weekly writing tips blog on their website.  She is currently penning her ever-changing debut novel, which involves lots of digging down :)

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