I am a passionate story teller.
As I reflect on my journey in creating meaningful narratives
There are 3 elements that I think of immediately that have become essential
elements in how I deliver a story.
There are many elements that others may hold as important to
their craft, even other elements that may be technically eminent, and even
other elements that I could mention that I deem important too, but these are my
personal top 3.
1.
The Story needs to be Personally Meaningful
2.
The Story
should be well told
3.
The Story
is a catalyst for change
The Story needs to be
Personally Meaningful.
Throughout my Primary school years, my younger brother and I
shared our bedroom. One of my fondest memories growing up is of lying awake at
night in our bunks while I told stories for Russell to help him sleep.
Sometimes he was fearful of something, simply restless, or just keen for an
imaginative story to finish the day. Fantasy and dramatic stories of friends
and brothers facing fears, struggling through epics, discovering new worlds, meeting
wonderful personalities, talking creatures, adventuring together, filled our
pre-sleep nights. The hero was sometimes Russell. Often a challenge was
conquered by the champions called “Russell” and “Shane” working it out
together.
My childhood story telling not only set a tone for our
brotherly mateship - that still resonates today – it developed my story telling
ability. Interestingly at its basic level this meant that for our stories were personally
meaningful because we were always part of the narrative somehow. In my simple
terms as a child, this meant using our own names. No matter how fanciful the
environment or situation crafted in those early tellings, it pertained to
things that we were wrestling with. Being personally meaningful meant that the
story was accessible, relatable, relevant, and pleasing. I have learnt that
people connect with other people, so I make sure I focus my story telling on
characters that emulate real life. The point is that the stories that pack the
most punch are ones that have an innate, almost incarnate persona. They are
authentic, open, honest, personal narratives.
The Story Should be
well told
Some of my early writing is so difficult to read with the
overuse of prodigious words, poor rhythm, unsubscribed animations, underdeveloped
characters, over simplistic logic, lack of meaning, pithy adjectival manoeuvres,
and just ‘bad’ telling that it distracted from what I had in mind. Somehow, I
had bought into the mistaken notion that a story had to have a complex
structure and had to be clever for it to be appealing, however, at its core, an
effective story structure is simple. We can tend to fall in love with our own
stories, and consequently we can end up including too many details. I guard
against this by crafting my story, then walking away from it for a few days. I
then revisit it with fresh eyes, and edit, edit, edit. I prune out all
superfluous details. I give people enough detail to set the context and to help
them experience the story and see what I see. Giving too few details doesn't
work either, as it prevents people from envisioning your story, so it is an
adventure in itself of achieving a pleasing balance.
Early on I was a better verbal teller (than writer), because
talking and drama, and flowing with dynamic improvisation seemed to come
naturally for me. When I began to flow with some of these same aspects in my
writing I found that I could weave a powerful narrative, not because I was
trying to drive the narrative, but I allowed the creativity to drive the story.
I started to be surprised myself where the stories took themselves. When this
began happening for me, I also started to get my audience more engaged: I have
learnt to make them wonder “what happens next?” or “how is this going to turn
out?” As the characters within my stories pursue their goal, they must run into
obstacles, surprises, or some happening that makes the audience sit up and take
notice.
They adage that stories don’t tell: they show is a good
reminder here. It is perhaps the most fundamental maxim of storytelling. The receivers
of our story telling should feel the environment, be emotionally engaged with
the key characters, see a picture, feel the conflict, and therefore become more
involved with the story. As my stories began to be told better something inherently
spiritual began to happen too. I relied on the Holy Spirit to help guide me on
my quest. Even utilising my imagination to envision how The Lord might be
engaging in my created world to bring life and reveal His Kingdom. Alongside of
this creative release, I began to learn some important construction techniques.
I am now a student of how to tell a story: its different forms, genres, writing
techniques and human pleasing, soul moving dynamics.
The Story is a
Catalyst for Change
Finally, an important goal of my story telling is that it is
not just a good read but that it moves people to grow or change. Stories have
at least one “moment of truth.” The best stories show us something about how we
should be responding in various circumstances, how we understand and connect
with ourselves, others, creation or the Creator. The power of a good story is a
profound one: it can help connect with and move your audience, and not just make
your material more memorable, it can inspire and transform. Maya Angelou once
said, “People will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but
people will never forget how you made them feel.” People are not inclined to
think about things they don’t care about. Stories stir emotions not simply for
melodramatic effect, but to break through the white noise of information that
continuously inundates us and to deliver the message: this is worth your
attention. Perhaps the most effective way to help people be engaged at deeper
levels to consider inherent changes for their own lives is by telling a
compelling story.
I love the gift God has given us to be creators with him in
our story telling adventures. I truly am grateful for this developing craft in
my life that I get to bless others with. In the forefront of my thinking is a
gracious God who I have joined hands with to make this journey together.
In the back of my mind I think the key aspects I have shared
above help take me back to weaving my tales with an innate fervour.
What are yours?
God Bless.
Shane Brigg :)
I grew up with a similar experience to yours, Shane. My sister and I would play with our dolls during the day and I'd make up a never-ending story about their adventures. At night, my sister would refuse to go to sleep until I related the next part of the dolls' adventures. Thanks for an enjoyable post.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed your post Shane. Thank you. What a wonderful way God developed your gift of story telling via the stories you told your brother. Reminded me of the hundreds of stories I told my my son when he was growing up. During his times of stress, we'd play a game of make believe where we would make up a story about aliens where he was cast as one of the characters. Pity I didn't write them all down. I agree with the 3 important aspects you bring to your story telling. Love the last one especially. I like this line in your post: "In the forefront of my thinking is a gracious God who I have joined hands with to make this journey together." We are indeed blessed that we can partner with the Holy Spirit as we craft our stories. Thanks for a meaningful post.
ReplyDeleteGreat post Shane...thanks for sharing your growing up days!
ReplyDeleteLike Anusha we told lots of stories to our son. Particularly while out on a walk 'Kit and Joe' adventure stories we told. We got Josh to join in and finish the adventure. Wonderful times he remembers (he is 25 now).
Connection and life changing inspirations are what I look for in a 'good'(according to me) book.
Indeed such a gift!
Thanks for sharing those important lessons you have discovered about story-telling, Shane. I particularly love that last phrase you used: 'weaving my tales with an innate fervour'. Such an important ingredient in all that we write!
ReplyDeleteKey strengths of good story writing well expounded here, Shane. I shared a number of similar points in my workshop today. :) I love how stories are such an integral part of childhood for many people. Thanks for your insights.
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