Monday, February 26, 2018

How To Write Awesome Dialogue For Your Film


BY CHARIS JOY JACKSON
Originally Published on The Independent Initiative

Today, I thought it might be fun to give all our CWD followers a bit of advice on how to write for film.

When it comes to knowing how to make movies, screenwriters should pay special attention to the dialogue they use for their characters. When it’s good, people don’t notice, but when it’s bad even your gran can tell.

You don’t want this.

I don’t want this.

So how do we write awesome dialogue?

There’s no magical formula -- creativity needs to breathe -- but I do think there are a few tools that can help you. Here are a few things I’ve found in creating awesome and strong dialogue.

THE SUBTLE ART OF SUBTEXT

My absolute favourite example of the subtle art of subtext comes from the classic When Harry Met Sally. It’s the final scene and Harry is professing his undying love for Sally (it’s about freaking time too) and then he waits for Sally’s response.

The novice writer for this romcom would have Sally say something like, “I love you too, Harry.”

But romcom genius, Nora Ephron, doesn’t have Sally say the mundane automatic response. Instead, Sally delivers the line in the clip below at 1:35, “... And I hate you, Harry ... I really hate you.” She’s saying, “I hate you” but her body language is professing her love.


This is perhaps one of the most obvious uses of subtext to date, but it’s brilliant. We love it. The audience loves it, the writers love it, and the actors love it because it allows them to speak the truth of the situation and not tell it through the words.

THE SUBTLE ART OF HOW NORMAL PEOPLE TALK
“Hello Jane, how are you doing today?”“Hello Bob, I am doing well. How are you doing?”
“Thank you for asking, Jane. I am not doing well today.”
“I am sorry to hear that Bob, why are you not doing well today?”
“Well Jane, I fell off my bicycle on the way to work and skinned my knees.”
Ok gosh, I can’t write any more of that! It’s too painful!
Clearly, we don’t talk in full sentences so as soon as you’ve got characters who talk like the above it sounds unnatural and bad. When it comes to your dialogue, it doesn’t have to be a dramatic change, it could simply be something like shortening “I am” to “I’m”.

For example how could you change the following?

“I am going to the store, is there anything you want me to get for you?”

There are many ways to change this to make it more normal, especially when you add on specific character traits of how someone talks. One person may use the word “like” more than another. Watching TV last night, I noticed how one of the characters says the word “honey” with every phrase. It doesn’t have to be a word you’d add, it could be the lack of words a person uses too.

If I took a look at the above example again, I may change it to something like this:

"Hey, going to the story, you want anything?"

THE SUBTLE ART OF HOW SILENCE IS LOUD

This is something not many people think of when it comes to dialogue, but it can be more powerful than any words you use; after all, a picture’s worth a million of them. Enter the beauty of visual storytelling -- filmmaking. We’ve got the best of both worlds. We get to weave magical words to create an epic film, but we also have the amazing power of a moving picture.

Is there a conversation where you can turn someone’s response into a look, or better yet, can you write a whole scene between two characters where the “conversation” isn’t spoken?

These are only a few of the several tools out there for making strong, awesome dialogue, I hope it’s inspired you to write your own phenomenal and creative dialogue. The beauty of these, is how they can be used for novels too!




Charis Joy Jackson is working as a missionary with Youth With a Mission (YWAM) a non-profit organisation & is part of The Initiative Production Company. She loves creating stories & is currently writing a novel, which she hopes to create into a seven part series. 

Here's to a life lived in awe & wonder. 
Welcome to the adventure. 

10 comments:

  1. Loved your humour Charis and enjoyed the interesting tips on dialogue. That clip was definitely worth watching and yes, the body language spoke volumes. Also agree how silence could speak volumes and is often louder than words. Thank you for the challenge and all the best with your 7 part series!

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    1. Hey Anusha! Thanks. Love that clip. It helps me write my novels too. I know most of it was aimed at film, but so much of film writing can transfer to novels too. I love the challenge of speaking volumes through silence :)

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  2. Thanks Charis. I love subtext in dialogue. It's so clever. I have been practising foretelling in dialogue, but subtext is hard. Was watching a movie last night - Guy Ritchie's King Arthur. Lots of fun pacing with the dialogue but I also thought there were moments when it was not needed at all, where the audience could have figured it out for themselves. All the best for your novel.

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    1. Hey Raelene! Thanks so much. YES, I was just watching a TV show the other day that said soo much more than they needed. The audience had already figured out what was happening but then the characters said it. I know sometimes you need that extra nudge, but so often you don't. Thanks for reading and I hope you're having fun with the subtext!

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  3. Thanks Charis, I always enjoy your articles. I've been thinking about dialogue quite a bit recently. I write nonfiction and I often come across fantastic dialogue recorded in old newspapers. I'd love to use it in my books because of what it reveals about people's character or the underlying conflict. But it’s recorded in a formal, stilted way which I'm sure wasn't how it was spoken. I'm still trying to work out how much I can edit it to make it sound more realistic and still put quotes around it indicating that it’s original.

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    1. Hey Stella, yes, it's hard to figure out how to still keep the real stuff when it's so stilted. Hahaha, Often if I find I just can't use it, I'll paraphrase. haha Not always something you can do, but hope that helps. And thanks for reading my posts. :)

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  4. Great post, thanks Charis. And as you say, dialogue and subtext is just as important in novel-writing as screen-writing :)

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    1. Thanks Jeanette! Yes, I think all of this can transfer over to novel-writing. I often use these tools for my stories. It's a bit harder to implement sometimes, but it's a fun challenge :)

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  5. Loved this post. I have a lot of conversations in my series and find that if I imagine the scene and become an invisible witness it works. However, trying to describe the non-verbal is quite a challenge. The clip was a great illustration of that. :)

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  6. Good stuff, Charis. My first thought was, 'Artful advice.' My second thought was, 'I wish you could see my expression so that you know I mean artful as in 'skillful or clever in adapting means to ends; ingenious: an artful choice of metaphors and similes' and 'done with or characterized by art or skill: artful acting; artful repairs' rather than the first dictionary meaning which is 'slyly crafty or cunning; deceitful; tricky: artful schemes' - thus proving the quintessential value of context, body language and subtext to alleviate ambiguity. (Or I could've picked another word, but where's the fun in that? ;))

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